[hell1991]

wow! tari your novella is fantastic and i'm not just saying that to be nice!!!
i havent read something that good for ages you have re-emerged my love for deep, dark writing!
i honestly think that you will not have the slightest problem getting it published if i could i would buy it now!
thanks for letting me read it tari its really made my day! :D

[Becks]

I read the first bit and it seem real good........unlike mine......I really need some help and ideas for mine, it a good hobby but I really would like to get a book published... :D ..............not that thatll ever happen like....

[hell1991]

yeah i know how you feel becks.
i wanna get a book published one day, i have the storyline for my book but whenever i write it it seems really boring! i keep wanting to skip to the interesting bits!!!
i liked where you story was going becks you should write the whole thing then edit it at the end. thats what i'm doing and its working a little bit!
how to give you some ideas......? err....i'm not sure, why not have a dilemna for each character? the main plot will always be about the main character but you could also have sub-chapters in you main plot to help the reader learn about the other characters?
does that help? :confused:

[Becks]

I sort of start the stories off then get bored at it then start to write another one and get bored, do you see where that ends up!


Hmmmm, I shall think about wheather that helped or not.... :D , thanks!


Ive sort of written some more of it...about another chapter....

[hell1991]

well, you could email me your story so far and i could try and come up with some ideas for you...? i won't write the book for you and if you get it published i wont take any credit for it i promise! you can even save this message if you think i'll nick your story!

[Becks]

Im not that distrustful!!

I might email it later when Ive finished the chapter......

[hell1991]

yeah go ahead i'll try and help out!
if there's anything specific that you want in the story (e.g err....a swordfight or something...) then tell me and i'll come up with some ideas to put it in your storyline!
tell me what the basic plot is as well before i come up with something random!!! :D

[Becks]

Ill try, but I dont actually know what the plot line is, the story comes to me as I go along!

[hell1991]

cool! thats a good way of doing it!
i know the storyline for the start and end of my book.....i have no idea about the middle of it though!!!

[Gemini]

i'm hoping to send my final manuscript there to be edited by Gary Crew
Good luck with your exam Gem.


Thanks Tari :DHi Gemini - just removed the libellous comments