bugboy
October 12th, 2005, 12:30 AM
I've been working on this story for awhile and I think the idea at least has some serious potential.
The problem is after setting up the stage, explaining the characters orgins and motives, I don't know where to go.
So please critique my story and maybe suggest some ideas for the ending. :confused:
Here's the story: Alien Landing on 1984 Earth(Not really) (http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/945p0.html)
ANY FEEDBACK WOULD BE GREAT!!
The problem is after setting up the stage, explaining the characters orgins and motives, I don't know where to go.
So please critique my story and maybe suggest some ideas for the ending. :confused:
Here's the story: Alien Landing on 1984 Earth(Not really) (http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/945p0.html)
ANY FEEDBACK WOULD BE GREAT!!