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bugboy
October 12th, 2005, 12:30 AM
I've been working on this story for awhile and I think the idea at least has some serious potential.

The problem is after setting up the stage, explaining the characters orgins and motives, I don't know where to go.

So please critique my story and maybe suggest some ideas for the ending. :confused:

Here's the story: Alien Landing on 1984 Earth(Not really) (http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/945p0.html)

ANY FEEDBACK WOULD BE GREAT!!