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EnlightenedOne
October 13th, 2005, 09:28 AM
Hiya, I've just posted two stories that I wrote recently. I have several stories on the go right now but these two are the first to be finished. They both started as experimental doodles but I'm fairly happy with how they turned out. Unfortunately, I'm very bad at judging my own work so as far as I can tell they're both a bit naive and corny - OK as experiments but a long way short of anything sensible. I'd appreciate getting external opinions on these as the main reason that I've only finished two stories is that I'm just not happy with the rest yet. Thanks in advance for your time.

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