Phantasm and Religion Stories

[Christopher]

Hello. I am seventeen years of age and have been writing for about two years now and have had the success of several short-story publications. I'm trying to take the step up to longer fiction while sorting out my main weaknesses and some of my latest stories have recently been displayed here by the good folks of sffworld.com . I was just wondering if anyone here has had the time to have a brief look and cares to share their thoughts if they have. I accept any critique anyone can offer, good or bad, from a chapter to the whole thing, as it all helps me improve and gain valuable experience.
Thanks.
CJL

Religion of Death:
Part One: http://www.sffworld.com/authors/l/levinson_christopher/fiction/religionp1p1.html
Part Two: http://www.sffworld.com/authors/l/levinson_christopher/fiction/religionp2p1.html

Phantasm 1
Part One (next two to follow): http://www.sffworld.com/authors/l/levinson_christopher/fiction/phantasm1p1p1.html