gabador
May 22nd, 2002, 11:35 PM
Hello,
if this is a bit early, then send any critiques a bit later.
This is the first few chapters of my Epic novel, called Duel. It might be three books once I'm finished, or it might be one.
Anyway. I'm worried about the following points, and would like some opinions on:
Dialogues: Amount of, and are they any good?
Characters: Believable? Likeable?
Feeling you get through: Dark, merry, mysterious, sleepy?
I'm also worried that I have way too many action scenes in there. If that's te case, say so, and I'll slow it down.
I also have the story on a site : www.stories.com/authors/gabador (http://www.stories.com/authors/gabador)
But it doesn't have all the pictures the e-mail will have.
Don't worry about the size of the piece. They're small book-seize pages.
All I ask is that you read the first five chapters, cause they're mainly about different characters.
Ok, I'll stop now. Hope you'll enjoy it.
Gabador
if this is a bit early, then send any critiques a bit later.
This is the first few chapters of my Epic novel, called Duel. It might be three books once I'm finished, or it might be one.
Anyway. I'm worried about the following points, and would like some opinions on:
Dialogues: Amount of, and are they any good?
Characters: Believable? Likeable?
Feeling you get through: Dark, merry, mysterious, sleepy?
I'm also worried that I have way too many action scenes in there. If that's te case, say so, and I'll slow it down.
I also have the story on a site : www.stories.com/authors/gabador (http://www.stories.com/authors/gabador)
But it doesn't have all the pictures the e-mail will have.
Don't worry about the size of the piece. They're small book-seize pages.
All I ask is that you read the first five chapters, cause they're mainly about different characters.
Ok, I'll stop now. Hope you'll enjoy it.
Gabador