Critique - Prologue (1093 words)

clong

December 29th, 2005, 09:27 AM

This (http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/1160p0.html) is the prologue for my Nano project from back in November. Any feedback would be appreciated.

clong

January 5th, 2006, 08:17 AM

posted a revised first person version of this here (http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/1174p0.html).

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