Expendable
April 3rd, 2006, 01:27 AM
Dazed and in pain, a man awakes in a grove of bamboo. Bushes rustle, revealing a dog that sniffs him briefly then runs off, barking. The man gets to his feet then checks himself for injuries. Fishing in his pockets, he produces a minature bottle of vodka. He starts running, stumbling, until he's clear of the bamboo and arrives at a beautiful tropical beach.
He hears cries and looks to his left. There, lying on the beach is the middle section of the plane, surrounded by other survivors either stumbling around dazed or crying out in pain. The doctor swings into action.
Later, after night falls, the survivors are gathered around small bonfires, looking out at the sea. Suddenly a strange metallic scream sounds behind them. Looking, the survivors watch as something unseen shakes and knock down trees in the jungle.
Anyone who's seen the first episode of LOST recognises the scene above. The characters arrive on an island but actually at the middle of a mystery. Things are going on and they've got to figure out what.
Instead of starting at the begining of a story, why not add a sense of mystery and start in the middle, hooking your readers as they join the characters trying to figure out what's going on?
He hears cries and looks to his left. There, lying on the beach is the middle section of the plane, surrounded by other survivors either stumbling around dazed or crying out in pain. The doctor swings into action.
Later, after night falls, the survivors are gathered around small bonfires, looking out at the sea. Suddenly a strange metallic scream sounds behind them. Looking, the survivors watch as something unseen shakes and knock down trees in the jungle.
Anyone who's seen the first episode of LOST recognises the scene above. The characters arrive on an island but actually at the middle of a mystery. Things are going on and they've got to figure out what.
Instead of starting at the begining of a story, why not add a sense of mystery and start in the middle, hooking your readers as they join the characters trying to figure out what's going on?