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JAGiunta
May 14th, 2006, 02:36 PM
I'm in the process of revising a completed fantasy manuscript. It's the first book of a nearly completed trilogy. I'll be revising the second manuscript in a couple of weeks and will make that available to anyone interested as well. The third book should be completed soon, with revisions to begin in a month or so.

Feel free to contact me here or by email. Any and all feedback is welcome. I have a thick skin ;)

Files are in MS Word format and will be sent as a zip.

Rob B
May 14th, 2006, 03:41 PM
Why don't you post a sample chapter with SFFWorld.com.

JAGiunta
May 14th, 2006, 04:02 PM
Done. I put the first chapter up:
http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/1527p0.html

All of the formatting has been stripped. Any idea if inserting html directly into the text will work?

warfitz45
May 14th, 2006, 08:07 PM
Done. I put the first chapter up:
http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/1527p0.html

All of the formatting has been stripped. Any idea if inserting html directly into the text will work?

Showing that bit, even w/ no formatting, helped me decide to give your work a read. I currently have 1 other work to critique ahead of yours (if you decide to send it), but would certainly be willing to critique (especially since you have tough skin...don't have to worry about bruising your ego). I will say that I liked the initial setup of a young adopted (and scrawny) boy being setup to follow his father into a physical sort of life. I'm guessing that won't happen and I know it'll have an issue to be dealt w/.

wf