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GreyMantle
June 12th, 2006, 12:03 PM
Here is a prologue to a fantasy book that I am trying to write. If I ever get it finished, and it is somewhat good, I might even try to get it published, but for now I'm just doing it for fun and to improve my writing skills. The world is pretty-much a D&D world, but the characters, the nations, the religion, the culture, and many of the subraces are all of my creation. Here's the link.
http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/1629p0.html
There might still be a couple of names or whatever that are Forgotten Realms, since that was where this was originally scheduled to take place, but then I realized I had it in me to actually create my own world, and so I did. I'm not happy with all my names, so they may be subject to change at any time.

GreyMantle
July 1st, 2006, 09:18 AM
Ummm... I hope nobody minds, but I'm going to put this on the first page again, since I would really like some opinions on this story.