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BrianC
June 22nd, 2006, 07:44 AM
I've given a lot of criticism lately, so I thought I would give some of you a chance for payback. :p So, I've posted the opening scene of my WIP in the stories section. Not really looking for a critique, but if anyone wants to read and comment, it would be appreciated. Link: Rose|Thorn - opening scene (http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/1664p0.html)