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July 30th, 2006, 03:45 PM
I recently wrote a story and I need some feedback from people that aren't related to me :D

A slight warning, the story contains extreme violence and isn't suitable for children. If this is a problem for the webmasters, please let me know! :)

Anywho, its a horror-sci-fi mish-mash :)

Darkness, Vengeance (http://www.ajroberts.net/Darkness-Vengeance.php)

Its just over 9000 words long. It follows the story of Mr Stranger seeking vengenace.

This is my third story I've completed. Not that should change your opinion of it :)

I very much look forward to your response(s)


July 31st, 2006, 06:17 AM
It is captivating. I like it.

August 2nd, 2006, 08:06 PM
Thanks alot for reading it!

I'm working on something less fantastical but just as 'guresome' - more horror than this piece, which has its Science Fiction parts :)

Thanks again for reading and I very much look forward to anyone elses comments or suggestions.