View Full Version : Grammar help, please.
RossE
December 3rd, 2006, 09:20 PM
Which is correct:
But writing, like talking, can easily be misunderstood.
or
But writing, like talking, can be easily misunderstood.
... thoughts, please.
MrBF1V3
December 3rd, 2006, 10:54 PM
I'm sure if I'm wrong someone will say something... but I think either would be correct. But the first is better.
B5
Rocket Sheep
December 4th, 2006, 06:25 AM
Nah, my vote is with the second... but I'd take out "can be" and put "is".
And I'm sure there's a grammatical reason for that choice... somewhere... but I can't find it in my brain... sorry. :confused:
BrianC
December 4th, 2006, 07:40 AM
Depends. In formal writing the second use is proper, because a helper verb should always immediately precede the verb to which it relates. However, in creative writing, all sorts of . . . well . . . creativity is perfectly acceptable. So, if this sentence is part of a creative work, then use whichever construction seems best to you.
juzzza
December 4th, 2006, 09:30 AM
Do you need the 'But' to start the sentence?
Holbrook
December 4th, 2006, 12:53 PM
Do you need the 'But' to start the sentence?
Nope, but that's me. I feel the sentence says what it needs to without the but, but then I have been known to be wrong...
Dawnstorm
December 4th, 2006, 01:05 PM
Um... I doubt we have enough context to judge the "But". Depends on the previous sentence.
Nothing to add about the original question; which has been answered in detail.
MrBF1V3
December 4th, 2006, 06:29 PM
Also, one should never start a paragraph with "But".
I am wondering if the first comma is necessary. :)
B5
Dawnstorm
December 4th, 2006, 07:24 PM
I am wondering if the first comma is necessary. :)
B5
"like writing" is an inserted phrase and needs commas on both sides (or, perhaps, none at all - if you don't want to set it off). The two commas are a team.
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