Grammar help please.

[Number Geek]

Hello and in advance, thank you for having this forum.

I'm a number geek and am very weak on grammar. I've visited this site many times over and it's been extremely helpful.

I'm in the process of writing a small paragraph for my daughter's graduation. Can someone take a look and make any corrections needed, before it goes to print (tomorrow).

One catch, I think she visits this site so if possible, I'd like to share in private messages.

I really do appreciate it. Thank you.

[Dawnstorm]

Hi,

Since there are people from many different time zone's on this board, it might help if you told us how much text you need edited in how many hours. At my end of the screen it's three in the morning (roughly), and I'm going to bed now, so I probably won't be able to help you in time. If all else fails you can drop me a line, though.

[Number Geek]

Thank you Dawnstorm, for replying. It's about five lines and I need it in about 6 hours. Wow, you're up late.