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Caliena
December 29th, 2006, 06:47 PM
I had already written this chapter to my novel and posted it but my computer was restored and I decided just to rewrite it b/c I wasn't happy with my first one. You can be a hard on it as you want. I just want a honest critique of it. Here it is...
http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/2205p0.html