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Shiloh
February 24th, 2007, 04:02 PM
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Ranger619
February 26th, 2007, 05:55 AM
All I can say is Knowlan is better spelt Nolan :cool:

Shiloh
February 26th, 2007, 05:34 PM
All I can say is Knowlan is better spelt Nolan :cool:

lol I like Knowlan better, makes it more 'spelled how it sounds' in my opinion

Rob B
February 26th, 2007, 06:08 PM
It is common courtesy to post your stories through SFFWorld if you would like the members to critique the story.

Shiloh
February 26th, 2007, 08:09 PM
yeah, I know, sorry lol. the thing is It is actually too long to post here 0.0 wouldn't let me! But I cut it in half so it works now ^^