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June 5th, 2002, 08:23 PM
Now this might get the mods a bit ticked. But, I think it would be a nice idea to give the group story that is currently in progress a nice critiquing from the outside.

IMHO I find it quite interesting. The plot can go in many places while the only true problems that I can find are minor spelling mistakes. Characters are already developing while the short amount of space the authors are writing in are forcing them to be rather concise with their wording.

All I have to say is Bravo!! guys, and that I'm sorry if I am stepping on anyones toes.

P.S. All opinions pleaded for.

We have a discussion thread for the short story already, so I'll move this to there rather than start a second one.

Cheers, Erebus :)