Talaith
July 12th, 2002, 02:37 AM
One of the other threads got me to thinking about this. Has anyone else ever had someone read a story you just wrote and that person come back to with a comment that made you ask yourself "did I write that?"
A couple of examples comes to mind for me. I have this one series of science fiction mystery stories I wrote a few years ago and for some reason the main character's wife kept getting a bad rap.
In the first story people thought she was one of the bad guys. In the second they thought my main character was cheating on his wife with her. By the third story everyone seemed to accept her but they all thought I hinted throughout the story that I was going to have her killed off by the end.
No one could point to anything specific in those stories that made them think that way, and I certainly couldn't find anything, but they were common reactions in just about everyone who read them.
The other example is the time one of my sisters told me she loved my use of color themes to set the mood for the scenes in the story she had just finished reading. I had no idea what she was talking about. She ran through the story with me and sure enough there was a pattern to the colors of people's clothing and the settings they were in that matched the mood of the scene.
A couple of examples comes to mind for me. I have this one series of science fiction mystery stories I wrote a few years ago and for some reason the main character's wife kept getting a bad rap.
In the first story people thought she was one of the bad guys. In the second they thought my main character was cheating on his wife with her. By the third story everyone seemed to accept her but they all thought I hinted throughout the story that I was going to have her killed off by the end.
No one could point to anything specific in those stories that made them think that way, and I certainly couldn't find anything, but they were common reactions in just about everyone who read them.
The other example is the time one of my sisters told me she loved my use of color themes to set the mood for the scenes in the story she had just finished reading. I had no idea what she was talking about. She ran through the story with me and sure enough there was a pattern to the colors of people's clothing and the settings they were in that matched the mood of the scene.