[Miriamele]

I just wanted to let "the powers that be" know that I submitted an alternate version of my story, Onan's Apprentice (under the name Jeanne Bourque). When it is posted could you please delete the previous version, which is on the site right now?

Thank you very much!
Miriamele :)

[Erebus]

Okay, we shall get to it as soon as we can. Thanks for letting us know. :)

[Jack Burton]

Just read your story..very, very good...great dialogue, very textured narrative..look forward to the 'alternate' version.

[LeMort]

Yeah, I'm really looking forward to reading your revised version too. I enjoyed your previous draft, and I thought that it had the potential to be even better!

[Miriamele]

LeMort, in the revised version I used the idea you gave me for an alternate ending. I hope it meets your expectations! :)

[LeMort]

I'm sure it will, and I'm even more interested in reading it now!