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Maceol
September 14th, 2002, 10:09 PM
Hey- the first part of my story, "The Heart of Dishonor" by Lee Chamney (me), is up. I think that the story on the whole is good enough to be published. It's an epic fantasy with multiple charcters and plotlines. I'm proud to say my sole fan gave it 5/5 (boo-ya!). If you want to review it or just vent your angst at epic fantasy by giving it the most savage critique ever conceived, check out THIS (http://www.sffworld.com/authors/c/chamney_lee/fiction/heartp1p1.html)

milamber_reborn
September 15th, 2002, 01:03 AM
Only read the first page so far, but the imagry of the battle is vivid. Good job.

The first paragraph had some long sentences missing commas.

Maceol
September 15th, 2002, 01:41 PM
The first paragraph had some long sentences missing commas.

Yeah, yeah, I know. The writing actually gets considerably better as it goes along, and I'll probably end up re-doing the first couple pages.