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milamber_reborn
October 18th, 2002, 01:10 AM
Maybe you could submit some of your story to this site.

Anyway, I checked out your site and commented in one of your closed topics:

First of all, good site.

I didn't read much, but will try to. How young are you? Your style shows a mastery of the language, and the plot sounds intriguing. Keep up the writing. You seriously have the potential to become an author.

I found a lot of errors as I started reading. I'll post my suggestions bit by bit for the prologue.

Rob B
October 18th, 2002, 08:25 AM
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