What do you think

[Gilbert Nolande]

Hello,

I am new here, and didn't really know where to begin.

I guess....

Here is a story I am working on,

http://www.eccentrix.com/members/teamearth/SilentSouls.html

Any comments or whatnot would be great.
Please feel free to explore the rest of my site at:

http://www.eccentrix.com/members/teamearth/

Thank you,
Jeff.

Hello Gilbert! I have moved this to the writing thread as it seems to be the best place to get a response! Hobbit