[zhardoum]

Hello all, I am in the process of writing a sci fi story, and would like some feed back, I wont say it is going to be short, each chapter is not far off 3,000 words and so far I am just starting chapter 4..

But please, read it and let me know what you think, this is the 2nd scifi story I have written, and I would love to have feedback, also when it is complete, is it possible to submit a 14 odd chapter meagalith to the archives?

chapter 1 -> http://www.adriansworld.com/stories/plasmaf/Plamsa%20Flare%20ch1.htm

chapter 2 http://www.adriansworld.com/stories/plasmaf/Plamsa%20Flare%20ch2.htm

Chapter 3 http://www.adriansworld.com/stories/plasmaf/Plamsa%20Flare%20ch3.htm

[This message has been edited by zhardoum (edited November 06, 2001).]

[Erebus]

Hi Zhardoum,

Please feel free to submit to us whatever you like - others have been submitting in chapters. With regard to the feedback on your story, placing this topic under the Writing section may get you better results, so I'm moving it there now. We usually discuss works alrady submitted here, but I'm sure a few of us will have the time to take a peek. http://www.sffworld.com/ubb/smile.gif



[This message has been edited by erebus (edited November 06, 2001).]