Stories

[Kilroy]

Oh Boy! I've been waiting a while for the next update. I have three stories posted at sffworld and right now i'm gonna post them right here and ask everyone you comes across this thread to read and comment on them. I would really apreciate this since i'm planning on sending the off to publishers right away.
Anything you could write would help, alot.

Primus - First Strike (http://www.sffworld.com/authors/a/azure_kalos/fiction/primusfirststrike1.html)
The Long Farewell (http://www.sffworld.com/authors/a/azure_kalos/fiction/longfarewell1.html)
The Horsemen (http://www.sffworld.com/authors/a/azure_kalos/fiction/horsemen1.html)

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[Kilroy]

I'm not letting this one die
-PS they've all been edited quite a bit since posting. Stupid me, i sent them in before really looking them over.

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[kater]

Haven't had time to read them all but I read Horsemen and would suggest you look at it again, there are several spelling mistakes - probably typo's, misuses of a word and also a few grammatical errors. Also while its a good story the narrative is a little disjointed and needs polishing before sending it to the publishers. Good luck.

[kater]

Ok read the others rather than revise - I like Primus much more but both need quite a bit of polish, you really need to read them again a few times to weed out the errors.

[Kilroy]

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[Kilroy]

Definitly not letting this die

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[Se'dray-on]

spammings not cool, if you have something contructive to say, say it, otherwise, don't bump. It just annoys people.