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January 14th, 2003, 12:21 PM
:D [COLOR=seagreen] Hello, My name is Mike Macqueary, and i would love it if someone would help me with my fantasy book called "Otherworld". I may be 14, but i tell you, i can write as good as my age. Could someone help? The grammar is out of shape, but thats not why i need help. I need to continue it, (i'm on pg 120 and i'm stuck!) and not only that, I may need Illistators and i need someone to rate it. I know i may be asking to much, but i'm a first time author. It has a great idea, my book, but this idea might have been put into the wrong brain. Please help!

Mike-if you mail me, i will send you the copy of my book (thus far):D

January 14th, 2003, 12:32 PM
Well you might as well send it to me as I might be able to steal your idea and use...

I mean, yeah I'll read it.

January 14th, 2003, 12:33 PM
My e-mail is [EMAIL=thewizerdofmerancape@hotmail.com]

January 14th, 2003, 05:59 PM
I think it might be to much asking for someone to read 120 pages. I certainly would not. You should try summing up your story and state what the problem is. Think this tactic would give much more feedback (actual feedback).

January 15th, 2003, 11:15 AM
too true, too true... couldn't agree with you more.... well crap... that is true... Well, i AM giving you a choice. But the problem i mentioned is that i need someone to read it and see what they think of it. I am so sorry, it does seem reaaaaallly greedy of me, thank you for pointing that out! :(