Story for critique

[milamber_reborn]

A sci-fi story I wrote a while back, "Mister Carson," should be up on the site soon. In the meantime, I'm desperate for critiques, so if anyone wants to read an updated version, send me an email at: milamber_17@hotmail.com and I'll send you a copy. I'm aiming for the pro zines with this one, so it needs to be in top condition.

[Rocket Sheep]

If you're writing sf regularly for prozines why not join a professional online sf workshop. You would have access to more critiquers in the field and if they help you they would get points to spend on their work?

I know a good one. PM me if you want details.

[Jacquin]

Read and replied!

Let me know how it gets on.

J