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wranlon
January 16th, 2004, 08:47 PM
Hey,

I was hoping that somebody wouldn't mind taking a gander at an in-progress short story. It's called "Blood of the Lamb" and takes place in the 'Wild West'. The story is in Word 2000 format, and I included a number of the original notes. There are a still a couple things I want to correct and change, and the ending isn't included. The story is mostly done. I haven't yet picked up any reviews on my stories posted here, so am hoping I could get some constructive feedback on this one .

http://www.whitefrost.com/volatile/lamb_01102004.doc

Thanks.