Crysania
March 15th, 2002, 02:23 PM
I just started this book and...uh...
Well, the STORY is pretty engaging (reminds me a bit of Dragonsong/Dragonsinger - Anne McCaffrey)and it holds my interest though it's not something I think about or dwell on during the day as I did ASoIF and other of my favorite reads, but....
The dialogue is SOOOOOO atrocious. JK Rowling's dialogue is better than this. Sorry. (I use the comparison because I can see Windhaven as being targeted to young adults although I don't think it was/is...)
The dialogue so forced and full of the story's exposition. It's like that SNL skit where Chris Farley would ask questions stating the obvious. Like he'd interview Paul McCartney and ask, "Remember...remember when... when you were in the Beatles?"
I think GRRM is a genious and I know this was written twenty years ago. Forgive me if I place the blame on the co-author (name escapes me and I'm too lazy to reach over and grab the book) but I refuse to believe GRRM was ever capable of such poor banter.
It's so completely distracting to me. Think I'll rant more about this on another thread just for good measure - the thread about what makes good fantasy. And let me amend my statement. Not just character but believable DIALOGUE.
Anyone else have comments on this book? I haven't finished the book, so no spoilers yet, if you please.
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Well, the STORY is pretty engaging (reminds me a bit of Dragonsong/Dragonsinger - Anne McCaffrey)and it holds my interest though it's not something I think about or dwell on during the day as I did ASoIF and other of my favorite reads, but....
The dialogue is SOOOOOO atrocious. JK Rowling's dialogue is better than this. Sorry. (I use the comparison because I can see Windhaven as being targeted to young adults although I don't think it was/is...)
The dialogue so forced and full of the story's exposition. It's like that SNL skit where Chris Farley would ask questions stating the obvious. Like he'd interview Paul McCartney and ask, "Remember...remember when... when you were in the Beatles?"
I think GRRM is a genious and I know this was written twenty years ago. Forgive me if I place the blame on the co-author (name escapes me and I'm too lazy to reach over and grab the book) but I refuse to believe GRRM was ever capable of such poor banter.
It's so completely distracting to me. Think I'll rant more about this on another thread just for good measure - the thread about what makes good fantasy. And let me amend my statement. Not just character but believable DIALOGUE.
Anyone else have comments on this book? I haven't finished the book, so no spoilers yet, if you please.
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[This message has been edited by Crysania (edited March 15, 2002).]

