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SubZero61992
October 14th, 2004, 02:14 PM
Alright, I think I have found my beginning.
I dont want to break the wordcount rule again so if anyone wants to critique it just say and I'll PM it to you.

And does that wordcount only apply to one post only having 1,000 words?

Or can I post the beginning in two post?

Expendable
October 14th, 2004, 03:24 PM
I'd love to read it. :)

Please send me a copy! :D

Drew
October 14th, 2004, 05:22 PM
I have seen you post about this a few times before, but didn't read too much into it. I would like to read some more of it, could you give me a brief rundown of what we are looking at? Scifi/fantasy/hybrid?

And how long is it?

I know I am picky! :D

SubZero61992
October 14th, 2004, 05:25 PM
Main thing: Fantasy
All things in General: Fantasy/Adventure/GraphicBook
LoL

I had to divide the chapter into three parts to send it to Expendable, so you do the math, in PM's only 8000 characters are permitted, I had to divide three times!
But I think I remember like, 9202 characters.

I guess a short description is a legend named Genjo in his younger years and this is how he becomes a legend.

Drew
October 14th, 2004, 09:35 PM
Not a big fantasy fan... if I were to read it, I would be incredibly biased just because of the sort of setup it had. Hehe!

I am sure there are plenty of others here that will help you. I know Expendable enjoys tearing people's work to shreds! ;) :p

Expendable
October 14th, 2004, 10:19 PM
I am sure there are plenty of others here that will help you. I know Expendable enjoys tearing people's work to shreds! ;) :p

Don't be silly. I use sissors. ;)

I'm trying to help.

He's learning. I just hope he's not using me to do his homework.

Expendable
October 14th, 2004, 11:46 PM
SubZero61992, you're trying to create a fantasy hero.

Please tell me here what you know right now about Genjo. Who is Genjo? What sort of person is he?

SubZero61992
October 15th, 2004, 05:45 AM
Most people dont know Genjo like I do, I guess they can't considering I am the creator. If I could make books then it would unfold.

I wrote stories long ago, some I have read, others I have watched while I try to sleep.
I have drawn pictures of various things to go with his history.

What I know about Genjo:

Swordsman
Has many relations with the outsiders ( don't ask, yet) :D
Brown hair turns silver later on.
His eyes are a blizzard.
And I have wrote a short story where he is training his son. ::Undecided::
Kind and helping
Has a darker side
Youngest person to come close to killing a Kelocta at age of 16.
Oh, and eventually is a heavy drinker.

That's pretty much absorbs everything else I know.

SubZero61992
October 15th, 2004, 05:46 AM
Don't be silly. I use sissors. ;)

I'm trying to help.

He's learning. I just hope he's not using me to do his homework.


Heh, I wouldn't do my homework if I had this long to finish it.

Expendable
October 15th, 2004, 10:34 AM
That's pretty much absorbs everything else I know.

But is he a hero, brave without thought to himself? Or just unwilling to stand by while others suffer? What motivates him?