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January 16th, 2005, 06:39 PM
This is the last chapter I am going to show.
I think it may be better if I combined this one into chapter 1, so I would like your opinions.

Whoops, I forgot to copy and paste my story and deleted it after I printed it!
So sorry please delete this thread!