[Erebus]

Well, since you were asking about stories on SFF, I have one, "Ghost of Elysium", which should show up any day now, I hope! It may be listed under the Horror section once Dag gets round to uploading it. A synopsis and extract of my first published Novella, "Reflections", will also be posted here soon. In the meantime, you can check out my stuff here: www.wn.com.au/clubclad/erebus/ (http://www.wn.com.au/clubclad/erebus/)

There's even a couple of freebies to get from the Download page!

P.S. Aaron, I have just read both your stories. Worlds apart, aren't they? It shows you have a diverse style. I guess I too picked up on the apparent over-maturity of your main character in Day Dream, and it's a shame the story wasn't concluded. However, it was certainly shaping up to be interesting and your style of writing appeared okay as well. My only concern was that sometimes I was confused with who was supposed to be talking in your dialog sections, and at times it seemed a little clumsy. But maybe that's just me! http://www.sffworld.com/ubb/smile.gif

Cheers, and keep up the good work!
Neil



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[wolfgang]

It's almost finished, I just posted the first two chapters. The rest will come in later, but not before I hopefully get some revisions of the first submission of Day Dream up. After I finish it and some other short stories I'm going back to novel mode, and hopefully someday you'll see it on a book shelf in Barnes and Noble.

I'll be looking for your submission. Looking forward to it.

BTW, thanks Dag for putting Day Dream up. I never got to mention that to you.

- Aaron Wolfe


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[Erebus]

Thanks, Aaron - I hope we both end up with many books on the shelves at Barnes and Noble!

My stuff still hasn't surfaced at SFF BTW, so I guess Dag must be pretty busy. Good luck with your writing.

Cheers,
Neil

[Gotenks_32288]

Overall I liked your story, but the main character is way too young! I did, however, think that it had a good storyline, but the main character is too young.

[wolfgang]

Thanks for your input and taking the time to read my story. As always, if you tell me the name of your submission I will be more than happy to read it and give you feedback ( if you want it that is ).

-Aaron