The Galactic Traveler - Escape
by, August 6th, 2009 at 08:11 AM (364 Views)
Attached is my first draft of my weekly that I am starting. The Galactic Traveler.
You can find out more info at my main website.
T. Ansel Knemeyer
Let me know what you like and dislike about the story. When you comment please state what it is exactly so I can see how I can improve.
I still have a lot of regular clean up to do but I am wanting to find out what interests the reader so I can adapt.