The Galactic Traveler - Escape
by, August 6th, 2009 at 07:11 AM (331 Views)
Attached is my first draft of my weekly that I am starting. The Galactic Traveler.
You can find out more info at my main website.
[URL="http://www.t-ansel-knemeyer.webs.com"]T. Ansel Knemeyer[/URL]
Let me know what you like and dislike about the story. When you comment please state what it is exactly so I can see how I can improve.
I still have a lot of regular clean up to do but I am wanting to find out what interests the reader so I can adapt.