Ansel_Knemeyer

Attached is my first draft of my weekly that I am starting. The Galactic Traveler.

You can find out more info at my main website.

[URL="http://www.t-ansel-knemeyer.webs.com"]T. Ansel Knemeyer[/URL]

Let me know what you like and dislike about the story. When you comment please state what it is exactly so I can see how I can improve.

I still have a lot of regular clean up to do but I am wanting to find out what interests the reader so I can adapt.

Thanks,
Tom