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    Seak

    Reading in May 2013

    I think it's the conversation they have in Gardens of the Moon, but I could be wrong.

    Currently reading Rough Magic by Kenny Soward and

    Seak Today, 02:00 AM Go to last post
    Teresa Edgerton

    "Over-explaining" - where do you draw the line?

    If the context is clear, readers will know what you mean. You may not even have to describe what it looks like if you show its function. (Which is probably

    Teresa Edgerton Today, 12:00 AM Go to last post
    MrBF1V3

    "Over-explaining" - where do you draw the line?

    The reactions to the same thing could be very different, and that would color the pov description; it could range from "Scary looking weapon"

    MrBF1V3 Yesterday, 09:52 PM Go to last post
    StephenPorter

    May 2013 Flash Fiction Contest

    It took about two hours to write, and about two weeks to polish into something vaguely acceptable. It's a rather bizarre experiment, but maybe it succeeded

    StephenPorter Yesterday, 09:45 PM Go to last post
    StephenPorter

    "Over-explaining" - where do you draw the line?

    Just because you don't describe something doesn't mean the character is brushing it off. You can show a character's shock or confusion without bothering

    StephenPorter Yesterday, 09:07 PM Go to last post

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    JWHorton

    EXCERPT: From 2013 Techno-Thriller: Cybersp@ce

    Excerpt from: Cybersp@ce...

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    JWHorton May 16th, 2013 09:23 PM
    expatrie

    I'm not dead!

    I've just been sucked under by a work-nami.

    That and the current piece I'm working on is not going well. I'm encountering some kind of personal resistance to the topic, I guess. Call it...

    expatrie May 14th, 2013 09:56 AM
    JWHorton

    EXCERPT: From 2013 Techno-Thriller: Cybersp@ce

    Excerpt from the 2013 Thriller: Cybersp@ce


    “I was still a young boy living in Corona, New Mexico in 1947, when I saw something crash near there. We thought at first it was a plane, but when we...

    JWHorton May 12th, 2013 01:50 PM