Critique: how do you write the infinite story?
I had this idea for an "infinite" short story. An oxymoron you say? Not quite. Simply a story that repeat itself, recursive maybe is a better word.
Anyway here it is:
Aside from any input always welcomed, I have two main questions:
1) Is it clear what's going on? Should I spell it out more?
2) How would you write the end? I'm not crazy about my solution, but I can't think of anything better...
Thanks as usual in advance to everybody kind enough to read and comment here.