They look very good. I can't wait for it to come out, those four chapters were just not enough!!! When will we be able to get a date to look forward to for the Crow to come out?
I loved Irc he is very cute!! Am I right in thinking he is a white crow? But he sounds much more intelligent than the birds that Maerad listens to that sounded like those seagulls on Finding Nemo. Also I think Hem and Zelika may end up having a thing for each other or is that just me?