February 26th, 2006, 12:14 AM
Please Critique: First Fantasy Story
This is my first time posting to sffworld.com, but I've noticed a lot of people submitting their work, and others offering great feedback and support. I've been writing a book for over 6 months now, and finally decided to post the first chapter for viewing. If anyone has any comments or feedback on it so far, I would greatly appreciate to hear it!
The Path of Mages [Chapter One] - The World's Cruelty
BTW, I have figured out if it's possible to italicize thoughts yet, so my apologies when the story goes into first person perspectives without any aesthetic distinction.
For those of you who read (even if you don't have comments), thanks so much!