Will it get sold? Who knows? But it's a story 6 people have liked, overall, and I'm very proud of it.
BTW, I wrote and published fanfic for 15 years (10 volumes of one zine and 10 of another), then wrote and published original spy fiction (written interactively with friends) for the next dozen years and counting (thousands of pages). Those stories are a bit indulgent with plenty of gratuitous sex and gratuitous violence. The stories are published under my legal name (zine style photocopies) and I don't use my legal name in online forums other than Facebook. It's a privacy thing.
Also, I lost 10 years in my attempts to go pro, back in the late-'80s to early-'90s because of bad advice I stupidly tried to follow that ended up discouraging me because I couldn't write the "right" way. I've mentioned this in earlier posts and it's why I get adamant about the 9 and 60 ways of writing.