
Originally Posted by
algernoninc
One thing that bothered me in the novel, and that I would like some input from other readers: in the real part of the story, the hard-boiled one, there's the whole subterranean adventure that is much too weird and I felt it should have belonged in the End of the World setting. Leeches, INKlings, underground mountains, mind control, sound muting: It made me wonder for a while whether this part of the story too is taking place inside the Calcutec's brain, and he is getting wrong inputs because of the meddling with his synapses.
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