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  1. #1

    Could I get some Feedback?

    I'm new here, but I have made a Sci-Fi short film, that I am hoping to turn into a Web Series, So I'm looking for some feedback and constructive criticism.
    It's called Cupiditas, and it takes place on a Space Elevator.
    Any opinions will be welcomed, positive or negative.
    Watch it in 1080p for maximum radness.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iD1uRTtxGow

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    hey ramakandra! watched it, 1080pd it, loved it! really thought the part was well acted and all the effects, although short, gave the sense the elevator was on its way up/in the future! the introduction was also great, the blue lines etc giving it that video/thx1138 feel, i can see you must be a lucas fan! nice!

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    Pretty good.

    Philosophical, amusing at times, and more than a little creepy.

    But it doesn't make a whole lot of sense to take a twelve hour trip in a tiny sealed room with no furniture and no bathroom.

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    Thanks for the reply! The elevator he is in is kind of like a service elevator outside the big main one for cargo and whatnot. There probably is a toilet/ bed in the wall or something. He is just too stupid to know since he never went through the training course.

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