Hey guys, it's been a while, life's got in the way of writing but recently I reviewed what I'd already written and decided to do another rewrite. I was wondering if you guys, gals and enigma's would do me a little favour and compare my old and new prologue chapters?
Things I'm looking for primarily is flow, ease of reading, understandability, characterisation and punctuation. There might be a few mistakes that I've overlooked in each and it would be much appreciated if you could also give pros and cons of each.
Cheers guys, the more response I get the better I can forge this beast.