
Originally Posted by
Archren
John, could you explain which deus ex machina you meant in Judas Unchained, maybe behind spoiler tags? I agree that Pandora's Star is better written than Judas (mostly because of the 500 page long chase scene that is the core of Judas' plot), but there wasn't anything that lept out at me as cheating. (My biggest problem was the Ozzie/Silfen path plot. What exactly was the point of that, in the end? Fun to read, but I feel like it didn't pay off.)
Perhaps deus ex machina is not correct, but the fact is that the alien menace was dealt with rather backhandedly
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"Oh, look, we've created a Superbomb. Let's blow it up and get rid of those pesky aliens so we can spend 500 pages chasing the Starflyer!"
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The problem was, it doesn't follow with what happened before. Remember that
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MorningLightMountain has been seeding colonies for years after the barrier went down,
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and was working on giving the motiles far more individual initiative (a concept derived from Dudley Bose's memory cell).
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One bomb wasn't going to do the trick - it would take hundreds, all exploding around different (unknown) stars.
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But... he wrote himself into a corner and we're now supposed to buy that
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one bomb saved the galaxy and that MLM just gave up
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[ADMIN EDIT: Multiple spoilers covered up. Hobbit]
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