Well, assuming this is a first draft, just jot down some notes and move on. You'll keep your momentum, and hate yourself later in the second draft.
True, Kerry. I dont mind it from a theoretical stand-point, I have adequate explanation and backstory to rationalize this stuff. it just comes off a bit...clean.
I'd think she'd be over him by now since we're talking years going by. That said, I'm betting nobody here's going to give you an answer that will fit
Been wrestling with a scene for the past three days. Cant decide weather to cut it, disperse it, or temper it. I don't know if I like how I handled the
Thanks everyone, once again, for clearing that up and the confidence boost.