Thank you for your feedback N.E.,
Honestly, I wasn't a fan of the whole first two sentences altogether. I felt the word "banal"
Oh, forgot to add, regardless if you change that or not, it reads very well overall. Good job, copy editor.
"conjures" didn't bother me, but the last part of the first sentence did.
"pick up some pace" just
It actually makes sense where it is, but not at first. On your WordPress.com Dashboard, click on Settings (bottom, left side menu), then Reading. In the
I have absolutely no clue what my trusty band of followers is getting every once in a blue moon when I post. I assumed it was some sort of notification,