Bumping this thread up from the second page because that story got an acceptance! At Allegory.
It has actually nothing to do with her being an emotional girl. It has to do with suspense fiction and that she's the cop buddy. The story arc goes like
Thanks for giving Hollow World a whirl. I really enjoyed writing something that had both our time and the future in it. I do have a new fantasy series
Glad you liked it!!
Hey so sorry for the delay in responding. I got a new computer recently and fuddled up my email. Where I used to get notices when people posted to this