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    Cerberus

    Really smart protagonists

    I'd say just his overall competence and problem solving skills. Those are both expected traits for a good story protagonist, but most don't pull it off

    Cerberus Today, 04:17 PM Go to last post
    kmtolan

    What do you think?

    Well, assuming this is a first draft, just jot down some notes and move on. You'll keep your momentum, and hate yourself later in the second draft.

    kmtolan Today, 04:03 PM Go to last post
    Hobbles105

    What do you think?

    True, Kerry. I dont mind it from a theoretical stand-point, I have adequate explanation and backstory to rationalize this stuff. it just comes off a bit...clean.

    Hobbles105 Today, 03:48 PM Go to last post
    kmtolan

    What do you think?

    I'd think she'd be over him by now since we're talking years going by. That said, I'm betting nobody here's going to give you an answer that will fit

    kmtolan Today, 03:28 PM Go to last post
    Hobbles105

    What do you think?

    Been wrestling with a scene for the past three days. Cant decide weather to cut it, disperse it, or temper it. I don't know if I like how I handled the

    Hobbles105 Today, 03:21 PM Go to last post
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