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Hmm, "Shadows Return" is my least favourite book of the series. You should head to the threads about her work so we can discuss it
Maybe he's just not big in the UK? Heroes Die is not stocked by UK Amazon and has 16 ratings. None of his other books except Starwars titles are available
I'll try to weigh in on Corrin's letter tomorrow. (I've had computer problems, so I'm missing stuff on some passes.)
And many people agree with you that rape wasn't the only thing that made Lisbet who she is. But other people did not have that impression, is my point.