Thanks RM and good luck with your revisions!
I may post or put out a call for critique on this one....it's only a few thousand words....I
Kenny, figuring out what to do with projects can be one of the tough parts of writing. Keep at it, both as you are now and allow it to change and grow
Curious. Couldn't he just publish an "unathorized sequel", just changing the names?
Looks like Zero hasn't been around for a few days. I'll set it up for him when I get back from work if nobody objects?
I don't know the book you are looking for, but the plot seems inspired by Poe's The Masque of the Red Death.