Cranky Hamster
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I seem to recall that I've read that book, and whilst it was a struggle to get through - especially the first half - overall, I found it to be a good book. I'm regretting that I didn't pick up the next book in the series. After it being so long since I read Cavern of Black Ice, I can't rememeber what happened in it well enough to be able to follow the plot of book two.
Yeah I can definitely see how this would be the case. The opener was very much a string of Strange and Portentous Events that were shaping up to become a central narrative mystery. If it were a little smoother and Jones didn't get so many little details of her worldbuilding wrong I would probably have gone along for the ride, and given that many of her dropped clues were indeed interesting and unsettling, I imagine the central mystery could have been a good one. If I run low on the book pile (hah, right, that'll happen) I'll probably go back to find out.
I feel like Jones' over-descriptiveness is a pretty big pitfall in her work, at least in the 50-odd pages I read. It didn't bog the story's pace down too much -- although if it continues after the narrative mystery's in place, that could change -- but the more extraneous and non-researched "realistic" details you stick in there, the more likely they are to be noticed as wrong, and then groucho readers like myself get all "wtf this book sux" and go read Bernard Cornwell instead.

