Apathy
Felix
- Joined
- Oct 25, 2004
- Messages
- 284
Alright, I read Ed Greenwood's Dark Lord and Arch Wizard in his Falconfar series. I think I should start off with saying that while the books are not that good, they are not total trash. He is able to describe scenes well, and his fighting scenes are energetic. But the books have been bugging me ever since I read them, becuase I know they COULD HAVE BEEN good books...perhaps.
The first problem is with the characters themselves. They seem to be totally static. They do not change even over hundreds of pages. Every character is for the most part unlikable, and I cannot seem to find any sympathy in myself for them (except for possibly the main character). The author also fails to flesh them out at all. He describes as the they are and does not even give a background besides their name and where they come from. The villians for the story are not impressive, as he describes their obsession with bondage sex more than the characters themselves. Greenwood introduces many characters, and he continues to introduce nearly 5 new characters at the very end of the book! These new characers get annoying when they take up several pages and seem to do nothing that truely impacts the story. And this brings us to the next point, which is plot.
Throughout the first book it was pretty obvious what was going on and where the author was going with the story. Find some magical place to restore some guy's memory, while avoiding the people who are trying to kill them. The first book got really old really fast when he made the characters repeat the same thing over and over. They would go to some place, rest then have to fight and run. This happened throughout the entire book.
The second book I had more hope for, becuase it seemed the main character had finally figured out what was going on, and was acting instead of only reacting. But it was extremely short lived...within the first 20 pages he was once again a bumbling fool. Strangely enough the main character did next to nothing in this book, and had less "screen-time" then a few other side-characters! After the main character's disgrace in the first 20 pages, Greenwood then started to describe a conflict in the region. It sounded interesting, but it was pretty much totally pointless as it could have been described in less. Much less. After the first descriptive third of teh book the characters in the story move around without much motivation, and I could not really care what happened in the story until something at the end caught my attention. An evil wizard sends minions to Earth to kill the authors responsible for "shaping" Falconfar. The minions go to the publishing house and kill lots of people and terrorize the rest. The ENTIRE thing sounded like some kind immature daydream so I had to laugh. And once again, it did not really impact what was going on in the story.
Man. The book had elements I like (people being blasted into oblivion, or cut into interesting pieces), but the story and characters are not convincing, and I do not really have any idea what the plot is about now that the second book is over. I think he is trying to go for something nebulous and all-encompassing like in a Malazan book, but Greenwood fails hard. I will probably not read anything from him again.
The first problem is with the characters themselves. They seem to be totally static. They do not change even over hundreds of pages. Every character is for the most part unlikable, and I cannot seem to find any sympathy in myself for them (except for possibly the main character). The author also fails to flesh them out at all. He describes as the they are and does not even give a background besides their name and where they come from. The villians for the story are not impressive, as he describes their obsession with bondage sex more than the characters themselves. Greenwood introduces many characters, and he continues to introduce nearly 5 new characters at the very end of the book! These new characers get annoying when they take up several pages and seem to do nothing that truely impacts the story. And this brings us to the next point, which is plot.
Throughout the first book it was pretty obvious what was going on and where the author was going with the story. Find some magical place to restore some guy's memory, while avoiding the people who are trying to kill them. The first book got really old really fast when he made the characters repeat the same thing over and over. They would go to some place, rest then have to fight and run. This happened throughout the entire book.
The second book I had more hope for, becuase it seemed the main character had finally figured out what was going on, and was acting instead of only reacting. But it was extremely short lived...within the first 20 pages he was once again a bumbling fool. Strangely enough the main character did next to nothing in this book, and had less "screen-time" then a few other side-characters! After the main character's disgrace in the first 20 pages, Greenwood then started to describe a conflict in the region. It sounded interesting, but it was pretty much totally pointless as it could have been described in less. Much less. After the first descriptive third of teh book the characters in the story move around without much motivation, and I could not really care what happened in the story until something at the end caught my attention. An evil wizard sends minions to Earth to kill the authors responsible for "shaping" Falconfar. The minions go to the publishing house and kill lots of people and terrorize the rest. The ENTIRE thing sounded like some kind immature daydream so I had to laugh. And once again, it did not really impact what was going on in the story.
Man. The book had elements I like (people being blasted into oblivion, or cut into interesting pieces), but the story and characters are not convincing, and I do not really have any idea what the plot is about now that the second book is over. I think he is trying to go for something nebulous and all-encompassing like in a Malazan book, but Greenwood fails hard. I will probably not read anything from him again.

