Wow I came out of that three day metal festival alive...if barely. Three days of inebriated bliss. Coming down is rough to put it mildly (eight hours of sleep between Thursday and Sunday, continuous fun with no responsibilities...recommended, will do again).
Anyway, what is definitely
not alive, is my short story. The draft, still missing two scenes.. I just didn't find the words to make it shine. Maybe it was because of a genre I've never tried; maybe because the characters ended up too bland...and I think I went with the wrong narrative style..bah. POV didn't really work...a mess with potential.
And I'm just not getting that time I need to salvage and rebuild, despite wanting to. It will have to wait for another opportunity. I thought it was a very cool theme this time so it hurts a little extra

I'm not sure I'll be online once deadline hits, so if you haven't seen a voting thread by the end of July 1st, feel free to make one.